Comic (City of Villains)
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Concept for a City of Villains comic for the EU contest. Remember to read the latest version!
Contents
- 1 News
- 2 Production
- 3 Story.
- 3.1 Page 1
- 3.1.1 Panel 1.1
- 3.1.2 Panel 1.2
- 3.1.3 Panel 1.3
- 3.1.4 Panel 1.3
- 3.1.5 Panel 1.4
- 3.1.6 Panel 2.1
- 3.1.7 Panel 2.2 (Pic)
- 3.1.8 Panel 2.3 (Pic)
- 3.1.9 Panel 2.4 (Pic)
- 3.1.10 Panel 2.5 (Pic)
- 3.1.11 Panel 3.1
- 3.1.12 Panel 3.2
- 3.1.13 Panel 3.3
- 3.1.14 Panel 3.4
- 3.1.15 Panel 3.5
- 3.1.16 Panel 3.6
- 3.1.17 Panel 3.7
- 3.1.18 Panel 3.8
- 3.1.19 Panel 4.1
- 3.1.20 Panel 4.2
- 3.1.21 Panel 4.3
- 3.1.22 Panel 4.4
- 3.1 Page 1
- 4 Logistics
News
Location
Location of story is now Haven on Cap au Diable since the view is very nice there.
Downloads
All images are now available for download as well as fonts.
Problems
Demo playback (dump) does not render models antialiased. As a a result, they look very jagged, so using demos is not an option. Problem was solved by creating a set of stalker/actors (The Rogue Isles Ninja Actors Guild) and taking pictures normally using screenshots.
Production
Layout
Curent layout looks very nice!
Lettering
All caps, bold for emphasis. Text below is in mixed case. Text in ALL CAPS will be bold in comic.
Fonts
Detectives inc for title font.
Webletterer BB for text. The italioc version of this font is slightly larger and in bold, so lettering should be easy.
These are free fonts from Blambot .
Story.
I may make an effort to reduce the amount of text as per Rockjaw's guide. Hack thinks we should less bold, and he may have a point.
Page 1
Not sure if we need to fit credits onto bottom of first page. I will check with Rockjaw. Assume strip half a panel high for COV logo.
Panel 1.1
Rick in front of Rogue Isles cityscape. Title: RICK AND THE ROBOTS
Rick: My name is RICK.
Rick: I live in HAVEN (on) Cap au Diable.
Rick: I go to school
Panel 1.2
Chest pic of Betty in school
Rick: "with BETTY..."
Betty: Thanks for helping me with my homework, Rick!"
Panel 1.3
Rick gets beaten up by Alex.
Rick: and ALEX. (the fact Alex does not like Rick does need a box.)
Alex: Stay away from my girl! (Girl no lonnger in bold)
Effect: BIFF/SMACK/Whatever
Panel 1.3
Classroom. Rick on knees (em greif, this allows me to move actors around). Go for a dark room with spot on Rick to make the others look more sinisters. Possibly most difficult pic to take.
Rick: I'll show you! (get you?)
Alex: You and what army? (What no longer in bold)
Panel 1.4
Classroom. Rick is sitting alone on desk.
Rick: Sometimes school SUCKS.
Panel 2.1
Rick outside building.
Rick: "After school I work in Doc's LAB."
Rick: "Doc says school is IMPORTANT."
Panel 2.2 (Pic)
Robot being upgraded.
Doc: "KNOWLEDGE is POWER, Rick!"
Rick: "Doc helps me BUILD stuff".
Panel 2.3 (Pic)
Robots in lab. Composite pic. Extra pics for a line of robots in front of the platform exist.
Rick: My army. (My no longer in bold)
Doc: "Good work, Rick!"
Rick: "Thanks, Doc!"
Panel 2.4 (Pic)
Flashback. Fembot smacks doc. Difficult to get slap or smack emote right, so I used smackyou (threat).
Rick: "Doc rebuilt his grilfriend once."
Fembot: "I DIE and you turn me into a fembot? CREEP!"
Effect: SLAP!
Panel 2.5 (Pic)
Doc laughing.
Rick: Doc is a MASTERMIND.
Effect: Muahahaha
Panel 3.1
Rick (full height pic) in lab (possibly in front of bots). Hand behind back (atease)
Rick: I know what he would do.
Panel 3.2
Rick (from behind) in front of door. Will probably have to use door outside, or perhaps a door in Atlas or Galaxy.
Rick: There are SOME things you have to do ALONE.
Panel 3.3
Rick with bots outside lab
Rick: This is NOT one of them.
Panel 3.4
Alex and Betty cornered in alleay. Betty scared (if emote can be found), Alex defiant.
Rick: "It's time to be the bad guy." (Bad guy no longer in bold)
Panel 3.5
Closeup of Alex. Perhaps smacking fist in palm of hand.
Rick: "It's PAYBACK time.
Alex: "Hit me with your best shot!"
Panel 3.6
Robot firing. Take pic during combat (against brick wall).
Rick: FIRE! (note: fairly small panel, so I thouht text could be removed)
Panel 3.7
Alex reeling back, as if hit by laser blast. Use slapreact and take snapshot when he is leaning back as far as possible.
Effect: ZAP! (Very difficult to get laser blast to show up. Are we allowed to add it manually? Perhaps the FX bubble is enough...)
Panel 3.8
Closeup of Betty against brick wall.
I knew you could do it, Rick! (Knew no longer in bold)
NOTE: I will try to find an alley in Mercey, that should be faster than taking pics in Cap. We do have a pretty good location, though.
Panel 4.1
Either in Cap or Arachnos base in Mercy. I'll probably do Mercy first and see how that turns out (faster). Alex and Betty on platform in Arachnos uniforms in with copter to the side. Camera near ground.
Rick: This is the Rogue Isles. If you have SMARTS and AMBITION you can go FAR.
Panel 4.2
Alex on street panhandling.
Rick: If you don't, you'll go NOWHERE.
Panel 4.3
Rick and Betty in classroom. One or both do em thumbsup.
Rick: "Remember: Knowledge IS power."
Betty: "Be cool! Stay in school!"
Panel 4.4
Wide panel, black background with white or light grey text. Use normal sans-serif font, not comic font for this (perhaps comic font for the stay in school message.)
Not sure this text should be in all caps
(large type)
One day YOU can be a robot mastermind, just like RICK!
(smaller)
All children are not so lucky. Do you know that one minion in twenty never learn s how to read? You can HELP! Tell your parents to make a donation to the Rogue Isles Foundation for Villain Literacy. FIGHT illiteracy and give ALL children a better future.
OUR future.
ARACHNOS LOGO (red) (or COV as in sample)
This comic was produced by Arachnos Press in cooperation with Doctor Steel's Robot Army of Doom and the Rogue Isles Foundation for Villain Literacy.
Logistics
NinjaNoHime has now created the villain group TheArtists and built a small studio base, containing the following prop sets:
- Small robot workshop/factory
- School classroom
The base turned out very well. It's a shame it was so expensive, since roleplayers might want something similar.